I don’t usually critique the composition in these stories, but the introductory sentence was simply awful! it would have parsed better, written this way: Dartmouth College said Monday that a lawsuit filed against the college, by a student who was seriously injured during baseball practice, has been settled,
And not to downplay the nature of the injury sustained by the student, but, really? He couldn’t tell that he wasn’t looking through the net?
I don’t usually critique the composition in these stories, but the introductory sentence was simply awful! it would have parsed better, written this way: Dartmouth College said Monday that a lawsuit filed against the college, by a student who was seriously injured during baseball practice, has been settled,
And not to downplay the nature of the injury sustained by the student, but, really? He couldn’t tell that he wasn’t looking through the net?