You’ve hit a new low in sentence construction. “In 2017, Governor Doug Burgum signed Senate Bill 2231 regarding the regulation of how insurance companies pay for air ambulance services in North Dakota into law.” This should be written as “In 2017, Governor Doug Burgum signed into law Senate Bill 2231, regarding the regulation of how insurance companies pay for air ambulance services in North Dakota.” Or possibly, “In 2017, Governor Doug Burgum signed Senate Bill 2231 into law, regarding the regulation of how insurance companies pay for air ambulance services in North Dakota.” dropping “into law” at the end of the sentence, nowhere near what it is modifying, is simply awful!
You’ve hit a new low in sentence construction. “In 2017, Governor Doug Burgum signed Senate Bill 2231 regarding the regulation of how insurance companies pay for air ambulance services in North Dakota into law.” This should be written as “In 2017, Governor Doug Burgum signed into law Senate Bill 2231, regarding the regulation of how insurance companies pay for air ambulance services in North Dakota.” Or possibly, “In 2017, Governor Doug Burgum signed Senate Bill 2231 into law, regarding the regulation of how insurance companies pay for air ambulance services in North Dakota.” dropping “into law” at the end of the sentence, nowhere near what it is modifying, is simply awful!